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littleotter73 ([personal profile] littleotter73) wrote in [community profile] giles_shorts2015-08-29 09:44 am

Drabble - Resolved

Title: Resolved
Author: littleotter73
Character: Giles
Rating: FRC
Word Count: 100
Setting: Pre-series
Disclaimer: For fun, not profit.
A/N: This is an epilogue for the fic I wrote and posted on shorts previously called True to One's Nature.

Rupert finished the last of his beer, willing the horrifying images from his mind. It was the stuff of nightmares, his reality. He'd been lost in a terrified haze until the bartender bellowed last call. Pushing away from the bar, he went to find the gents and found a payphone instead, debating with himself until he finally made a decision.

His hands trembled with fear when he heard the groggy, familiar voice come over the line. Taking a deep breath to steady himself, he pushed the coin in and said, "Hello, Dad? Yeah... it's me. I want to come home."

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[personal profile] il_mio_capitano 2015-08-29 04:48 pm (UTC)(link)
This is very good. I Love the simplicity of the ending.

[identity profile] feliciacraft.livejournal.com 2015-09-08 08:07 am (UTC)(link)
I need to read "True to One's Nature" (a glance at the length tells me I probably shouldn't attempt it now when I'm supposed to be in bed already), but I love this, how understated it is. There isn't a single word about Giles' inner debate, but we can tell from the ending that he's thought long and hard about the decision. Very nicely done!