Interesting. Wasn't sure what the hell you were doing at first but I get it. Giles is lightheaded and his internal monologue is struggling for sentences. The fall is a very interesting idea and quite reasonable even if on the face of it, it's a bold choice to see one of the heroes have a moment of physical weakness.
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Date: 2014-01-23 08:48 pm (UTC)Cool experiment in trying something fresh. Bravo.