Thank you. It's interesting to realise that had it not been for this first line last business, I'd probably have ended this on the 'hope to die' line. But as that seemed a tough first line, I worked it around until I got something more open. Be my guest probably works better too, which is an interesting lesson I've learnt in writing.
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Date: 2015-03-05 09:56 pm (UTC)